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Post by Deth on Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:15 am

It may be a little difficult to understand why this one is fit for the Rage/Rant section, but I'm sure you can figure it out. Additionally, if you're a fan of good music, some of this may sound oddly familiar. =)

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Hold my hand, she says, take me higher.
Be my love supreme and my rolling stone.
Put me on the A train.
Strand me out on Blueberry Hill.
Time buckles and sways, dreaming in color, backward and forward.
He is sunny side up when the sun goes down.
Dark alleys are saxophones, he says, not muggers.
He wakes her with a tulip between his teeth.
She loves her body when he loves it.
What are the limitations of allure?
She mirrors his highs, lights his lows and loses his interest.
His hat is his halo.
He leaves to escape trouble, and to bring it on.
She sings the blues and plucks the dead heads off the daisies.
He is a moth the size of a small bird who has eaten his way through her matching skirts and sweater sets.
She sews her holes and moves forward.
He pauses and looks back.
Remembering her compilation of cool curves, he imagines turning her upside down and pouring her out, backward and forward.
He says, if you would, dance with me.
I'm a fool for you.
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Post by Sarah on Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:13 am

Tom, when you become famous for your poetry. I want a book please. .... with an autograph. ty. I should bring this to my english teacher and make him analyze it x)

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Post by Cathy on Wed Nov 24, 2010 11:37 am

Sarah wrote:Tom, when you become famous for your poetry. I want a book please. .... with an autograph. ty. I should bring this to my english teacher and make him analyze it x)
This (:
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Post by Alex on Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:43 pm

I read like all your poems, you made me change my way of thinking about poetry itself ;x
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Post by Magic on Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:45 pm

I like how your deep into poetry
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Post by Deth on Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:48 pm

Thank you all for your kind words ^_^
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Post by Magic on Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:59 pm

Your words get me erect, in a good way
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