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Post by odsmk on Sun Feb 20, 2011 12:15 pm

i am writing a book
here are the ideas i have came up with so far, just putting here to transfer over when i go to moms

Spoiler:
working in a factory in england
making the watch under force
raining hard
1:17 am
gaurd slips in a wet puddle
dim yellow lights barely lighting it
1943
gaurd falls, breaks something lethal
man under force finishes the incomplete-
design of the watch, but finishes the
workings of it
takes the watch, puts into pocket of
long black coat
he takes the knife out of the
gaurds side pocket, stabs his neck
kneels down, prays over him
runs out of the factory at full speed

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running through the dark cobblestone
streets
dark, rainy
he sees some light of a ferry
he runs to it
trips, falls face first, gets cut up
it starts to go as he gets there
he dives in the black waters
he swims to ferry and becomes a stow-
away

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stumbling around on the ship as if he
is sick or something
almost blinded from the nasty water
filling his eyes
starts to talk but cant
a crewmember comes up pats him on the
back a few times, rough
the man hurls out water
the crewman lifts him up and gets him a
chair, feels like a rocking chair cause
of the rocking water
another crewman gets him some medicine
and gause for his wounds

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2 other men carry him into the main
lounge
they sit him down, ask for his name
he refuses and says it doesnt matter
he is just a stow-away
captain comes and gives him a glass of
wine
the man struggles to lift it and drink
he gets it down and says he just needs
to stay aboard until they hit land
then he can go on his on separate way
the man notices the dim lighting in here
it is kind of 'shitty' like the factory
he remembers about the watch
he takes it out saying he needs to
check the time
he studies it for awhile
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Post by Sarah on Sun Feb 20, 2011 12:39 pm

Yea... better save a copy for me :p

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Post by Hugo on Sun Feb 20, 2011 12:40 pm

The big twist is that he's actually gay right?

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Post by odsmk on Sun Feb 20, 2011 1:15 pm

Hugo wrote:The big twist is that he's actually gay right?

No. Neutral

gay wasnt invented until like 2003, this is 1940s
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Post by Hugo on Sun Feb 20, 2011 1:30 pm

odsmk wrote:
Hugo wrote:The big twist is that he's actually gay right?

No. Neutral

gay wasnt invented until like 2003, this is 1940s

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Post by Germy on Wed Feb 23, 2011 8:24 am

I guess that makes him a homosexual. Since. . . . that's probably what they called it
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Post by GuymanGuy on Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:35 pm

odsmk wrote:
Hugo wrote:The big twist is that he's actually gay right?

No. Neutral

gay wasnt invented until like 2003, this is 1940s
So the bible was written in 2003?
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