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Post by linden on Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:24 am

For language arts Btw I know it kinda sucks

Might be wierd format cuz i copy and pasted it. I tried to fix it.
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One thing that shows loyalty to me is my pet cat. We got her because she was staring at us with the cutest look when we went to the rescued cats shelter. Nobody else got her because they wanted her only, but actually she had a sister, We decided to take them both to live with us.

Once we got Dory we knew it was the best choice because Dory showed alot of loyalty. Wherever I go Dory will follow me. When I sleep she will sleep with me, when I run out to get a snack she will come. She is an indoor cat so she has not much more to do than follow me and show her great loyalty. When we give her food she will always rub against me, before we give her food she comes right to me and purrs.

Dory will come to me with all the things I taught her. If I snap, she will run to me as fast as she can. If I click my tounge she will run over to me. If I clap she will come to me. If I do any of these things and she is by me already she will just look up at me and stare. When she gets there she rubs her head against me or my friends.

When i'm feeling down she will lay beside me. If she hears me crying she just somehow knows that im feeling blue and will come lay by me. Even when im not crying she still somehow knows, she walks up to me and just lays there right next to my ear and purrs. If im ever on my computer she will just walk across my screen and won't ever go away unless I tell her to, ever though when I tell her she just moves and still lays next to me. This gets a bit annoying but atleast I know she will always love me and be by my side.

Dory is the best cat I have ever gotten. If she ever gets outside of the house she will always come back, she is not allowed to go outside but when she does I am never worried because I know she will be back soon. When she's away I am just worried that something will happen to her. She shows so much loyalty to me by coming when I snap, rubbing against me, coming by my side when I am feeling low. I am glad to have her and she is glad to have me.

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Post by Magic on Mon Mar 28, 2011 10:54 am

She kinda looks like mine.
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Post by Yulli on Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:12 pm

Just wondering: if you thought/knew it sucked, and if it was just some essay for school, why'd you post it here? =P

Your cat is very cute; my friend has a cat that looks exactly like that one. As for the essay: o-o.
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Post by Hugo on Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:51 pm

awww that was heart warming to read. Very cute.

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Post by linden on Tue Mar 29, 2011 1:15 am

Thanks hugo xD

~Btw updating this soon rewriting it in a bit~

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