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Post by linden on Mon Apr 04, 2011 12:40 am

Ant's View
I'm an ant, small to us but big to some. To me, an ant I see almost all things as giants. For example: A person is a twelve story building. A bath tub, a giant tsunami. To me the smallest to a human is the biggest to us. If I were to go to the ocean, It would be a giant wave, the biggest tsunami ever seen. To a human it's a fun place to be around and to swim in, to me a death spot. My food is just scraps left from humans, the only place we go is where there is food. We don't try to be annoying when we croud your house, It's just our own way of living.

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I'm an ant, small to us but big to some. To me, an ant I see almost all things as giants. For example: A person is a twelve story building. A bath tub, a giant tsunami. To me the smallest to a human is the biggest to us. If I were to go to the ocean, It would be a giant wave, the biggest tsunami ever seen. To a human it's a fun place to be around and to swim in, to me a death spot. My food is just scraps left from humans, the only place we go is where there is food. We don't try to be annoying when we croud your house, It's just our own way of living. We are afraid of many things that a human has, unlike us they have arms, we only have legs making it harder for us to live ourselves so we go to you for food.


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I'm an ant, small to humans, big to few. I am prey to most because I'm so small. To me, an ant I see almost all things as giants. For example: A person is a twelve story building. If I were to go to the ocean, It would be a giant wave, the biggest tsunami ever seen. To a human it's a fun place to be around and to swim in, to me a death spot. To me the smallest to a human is the biggest to us. If I were to take a leisurely stroll I would have a high risk of being stepped on or killed somehow. I would have to take life as a whole different thing, trying to survive is your main goal. If you were to see a person you would have to run, you can barely take a break. A human can pick up a loaf of bread and eat it in a week or so. Take an ant finding a whole loaf of bread, It would take a month or so to eat the whole thing. To an ant finding a loaf of bread would be the happiest thing to ever happen, because It will last so long.
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Post by Teresa on Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:07 am

Nice =)
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Post by linden on Mon Apr 04, 2011 10:31 am

ty.. Very Happy

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Post by Hugo on Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:58 pm

I kind of like the original point of view you're depicting, although it's a bit simplistic.

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Post by odsmk on Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:29 pm

Great idea, crappy writing. Just my opinion. o-o
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Post by linden on Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:50 pm

Eh, We had to write an Paragraph Btw it's my Rough draft, some stupid kid in my class was editing it and on my paper it said "Small to humans but big to some" he commented
"Ants are big to humans?" (FAIL)

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Post by imstraight on Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:05 pm

Its sketchy, but other than that..nicely done Very Happy
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Post by Sarah on Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:26 pm

A little rough, but hey, you're 11 props for that.

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Post by odsmk on Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:09 am

Protip: don't use the same comparison twice; e.g. tsunami. A bathtub is nothing compared to an ocean. I get what you are saying though.
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Post by linden on Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:51 am

odsmk wrote:Protip: don't use the same comparison twice; e.g. tsunami. A bathtub is nothing compared to an ocean. I get what you are saying though.

Tried to fix that?

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