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Post by Deth on Mon Apr 11, 2011 12:42 am

Already Gone by Lucifer T.M.M.

Food on the table and bills to be payed,
Lucky for this, not out getting laid.
Standard pole position; generals greet your hip.
Get what you can get, take all and each tip.

They're inward bound on your way home;
To the dirt, to the floor, if nothing is shown.
It's theirs either way, even if you refuse
But you will not let them frighten you.

When you're weak on the ground, beaten faster
You'll be taken home soon.
When you're dead on the ground, bleeding faster
You won't be arriving anytime soon.

I can sense it in the way your eyes and lips break;
Your body is cold and you think you're already gone.
No, it is simply in the way your body lies.
I'd love to hear you but I'm sure that you're already gone.

The words that spill out out of my mouth speak
So listen close, I'll tell even if you're already gone.
In my life I have shared but one more lust that you;
it was then, I saw no treachery in the lending of my soul.

Believe her, I won't leave you, I'm not leaving at all
You're not buying it, eyes frost and pale as stone.
Love everything you do, and everything you are.
You're so close, dear, and yet you're so far.
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Post by Sarah on Mon Apr 11, 2011 1:01 am

It's hard to describe your poems and even I don't understand most of it, but just reading it, the way you put words together is somewhat magical Tom.

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Post by Cathy on Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:07 am

I love the fact that you're still writing these. Even after so long! I thought you'd eventually get tired and stop, but you didn't. I love it.
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Post by Deth on Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:35 pm

Hey thanks. =)

I really enjoy this one, it's was one of my favorites to write.
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Post by odsmk on Tue Apr 12, 2011 4:42 pm

I like the rhyming in it. Razz
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