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Post by Deth on Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:03 am

I suddenly got an inspiration to write this poem. =)

Untitled by Lucifer T. M. M.

Thimble, Thread, Twine, Needle.
Descend upon the embellishing inferno.
Become not what you envy to be, but the loathing of self-tainted putrid.
And I am the flame that will devour your afflicted carcass,
after the malevolent God you preach and bow becomes the immaculate Devil in your essence.
There will be death.
There will be carnage.
And murder, deceit.
I demand the agony of delivery.
As I gleam.. and beam.. and glare upon the sickening spectacle of your acridly enkindling corpse
I will envision a clear and saintly cosmos
Among which the reputable will writhe,
and the corrupt will flourish.
You will be my birthly conception of this endeavor.
You will be my myriad of attempts at new life.
To ignite and enthrall in and around my euphoric combustible cadaver.
We are the dead, the broken, the wrong.
The thimble of your cowardly infectious soul.
The thread of your striving vain ambitions.
The twine of your completion will only ever burn.
The needle of which you alter your last mortal shallow heartbeat.
Today, I live.
Today, you died.


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Post by EricShawn on Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:10 am

o - o"..

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Post by Eddie on Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:31 am

0-0.. Deep?
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Post by Vicky on Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:15 am

Well written. (Silly but I casted a positive vote for your poem rant.) LOL.
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Post by Ever on Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:58 am

im with vicky here. well written. + repped
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Post by Julia on Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:02 pm

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL.
I didn't understand half the words. Looooool.
I'm so stooopid.
but, It looks reaaaaaaally well written :]

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Post by odsmk on Fri Jul 23, 2010 6:37 pm

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Post by Deth on Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:46 am

Haha, thanks for the kind words. I may write another one soon ^^
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Post by XNinjaFuHiya on Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:03 pm

Dude that was pretty deep - i felt the mood xD + Rep
Was your inspiration some type of anger or something? >.<
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Post by Jamez on Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:55 am

So, your names Lucifer t.m.m now?
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Post by Deth on Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:32 pm

Lol. Those are my middle and last initials.
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Post by Hugo on Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:06 pm

A poem about you killing a person and that person going to hell?

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